The ballad about Annie:

She washed her hair
It was late, but she wanted to do it anyway
She didn't want to go to bed
and sleep into another day
At 3 o'clock she lied down
She couldn't sleep, just stared at the window
She wondered; What day is it tomorrow?
She couldn't sleep, 'cause she didn't want to wake up
to another day

What were you doing in my head for so long?
What were you trying to say?
I didn't know until now
You were tired of it all

She cried ev'ry night for many years
She didn't care about herself anymore
She looked like a mess,
her eyes looked tired,
and her body was full of bruises
But no one cared at all
She had to live through it all

What were you doing in my head for so long?
What were you trying to say?
I didn't know until now
You were tired of it all

What were you doing in my head for so long?
What were you trying to say?
I didn't know until now
You were tired of it all
Rest in peace dear Annie
I hope you're better where you are now

hey Kine, nice tune... the vocals sound really heartfelt and make the werds come alive...

i like this as lofi the way it is...
when you have the chance to clean it up i'm sure it'll tickle the ears of the masses...


Bu Cuo!

  thanks

Nice nuance in your voice, you should add asecond voice that makes long tunes would make the emotion come out

 This is really really really really really really really really good......

  really it is....

 I find it to be very emotional and well thought out.... Really I do.....


     I really enjoyed it...... Like Jackfancy said, The lo-fi recording really fits this... and makes it really enjoyable to listen to....

    JimK  

Thanks! 

You're beautiful.
A godess of rock.

Unique style, what I think is a key feature in music these days. A real emotional song, heartfelt, beautiful, sad. Wow.

WB

I don't know if I have heard all your music you have posted so far but this is the best one I have heard. This is one is fantastic.  I'm really liking your voice in this song.  great job with the acoustic solo too.  you keep this up and you will be a star (read you bio).  you sang this real smooth and the tones are fine not to many highs or lows .
 Just the right amount of reverb too. 

So this is gonna get a real high vote cause it is real hard to just play acoustic and sing and make it sound this good.
 great job
greg

wow!

Thanks y'all!! 

It sure is a little masterpiece. Still basic in the recording techniques, but lyrics, construction and performance are ... just beautiful...

In fact the minimalism greatly adds to the song - agreed with the goat: keep this up, you already have a few fans

That was excellent!
You get a very high vote from me (I do remember to vote, when I think it counts! lol)
I'm an addict.......need more.....loads more!

TG, I don't know if Ive heard ALL of Kiens music here but I've heard a lot that I do know.
I joined bandAmp  6 months ago, the first I heard of Kine were 'water-logged MP3 player recordings' where she said she couldn't sing and hated her voice!!!!!

In those 6 months you've progressed SOOO much Kine! And I find that in it's self as beautiful as your songs!

O! I just found more........

hehe    Thanks!! 

OMG
Beatiful
Kine!
Gets vote

thank you!