TITLE TRACK OF DEMO/ALBUM

Like the guitar part.... Fairly cliche, but it's ok...  I like the fact that you are doing the rap/hip hop thing without making it filthy.. instead, you bring love and beauty to it... 

   This is good, the ending is abrupt, and odd...  perhaps this mp3 is messed up?  hmm.. It's inly 1:23 long.. then it makes a horrible noise at 1:28... 

   Me thinks it's screwed up my friends... 

         JimK

in fact, this is the only "near" rap song (meaning I don't even listen to anything that comes close to rap) that I listened to all the way through.. it was ok.. would so like to hear the refined, final mix down of it!

  drums are innovative.. placed in just the right mind set..

  Guitar is very down to earth.. pleasant to the ears.

  Her Vocals show alto of promise.. Tweaking them in
so she holds pitch and vocal sustain could help her to
polish it right up!

I am worn out myself so what folk will hear out of me will only be a stab at
former glory.. But I hope I can do half as good as this was!!

Thank You for making a rap song I could listen to and not curse the one
that wrote it, recorded it, and the little mutha that thinks he's gotta become
a playah and wanna-be-OG, sell crack, kill someone and do time just to be
able to become a great gansta rapper! I honestly believe that mind set is
very destructive and is undermining the mere fiber of humanity. that and
the crack, xtc, ice, horse, cain and all the other harmful chemicals that is
being used to weaken out society... (the world wide society of true brotherhood!!)


Blessings,  Peace, Love,

Dan - Blueyes

this is really nice...I like how the song goes from pop to Rap
I guess its pop....
Im not into rap
But this is clean Rap...Nice
But I like the way the song was done
Very Nice vocals from the both of you

nice rating

Flyer