#1March 3rd, 2007 · 09:07 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Crazy Man

This song is not in a battle

This was the first song I wrote on guitar when I first picked it up (hence why it only has one chord)
and I decided to re-record it and flesh it out a bit more.

Unfortunatley it was a little too high for my singing range, so apologies if it sounds a bit flat.

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#2March 3rd, 2007 · 09:49 PM
16 threads / 15 songs
44 posts
United States of America
Yeah, like you said, the vocals are a little flat some of the time. But mostly I think it's pretty cool. Aside from the vocals (which isn't that big of a deal to me), I think this is a pretty solid song. Kind of reminds me of a less weird Animal Collective.
#3March 5th, 2007 · 08:58 AM
8 threads / 8 songs
29 posts
Invest in some good recording cause it really makes a different
#4March 5th, 2007 · 12:31 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
i love this.The background key is awesome.I feel like im in flower land near feelgood city.great job.Yes you could better the recording quality but I still think is pretty nicely done
#5March 7th, 2007 · 06:44 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Dig it!  Yep - you're flat - but for some reason - it doesn't bother me...it fits.  It's amazing what you can do with one chord eh? 
#6May 16th, 2007 · 10:59 PM
14 threads / 14 songs
232 posts
United States of America
No dude with your voice in that range like that it is a natural contrast to the harmony of the rest of the song. You're doing it on accident, hell, bright eyes is a band famous for doing it on purpose. Plus, with the lyrics not as happy as the rest of your song it has adds a dichotomy you know, the upbeat-up tempo contrasted by your slower, lower and slightly more monotone voice creates a lyrical value.

I really like the guitar part at the end. It kind of sounds like two guitars, which is cool. (If it is mixed, thats cool, too)
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