Hi there!

I thought feelings could use some more energy

so i tried some things..

Let me know if you like it

and most of all...things yet to improve!!!

things to improve myself
-there are 3 false notes in the solo
-.the drums are boring
- chorsu guitar is loud in right ear

Great fun feel. Reminds me a little of 'Madness'. Have you any lyrics you could add. I think you should work on the intro, the percussion does not go with the music, and perhaps shorten it too [just the intro I mean] I think the overall structure is OK, perhaps try to improve the overall production. Happy Days!!!!

Denis

You should be working for Radio 538 or some other station in Hilversum.
Your good, you make good clear sounds and music.
I don't fully understand the Clinton samples, the music is not in anyway related to the sample.
I can really imagine this as a soundtrack (or the video to..) some spoof western movie, it's really funny.

beginning is a little off beat, not very appealing to my ears, and it also kind of sounded like a baseball game... horns are awesome! reminded me of a song, but i cannot remember. I like everything, but the beginning could do some jazzing up. (horns are cool)

Thanx all for the comments!!

To Dennis:

I still don't have any lyrics or vocal melody in mind..that's not my strongest point unfortunatly.
I'll try working on the intro and get ride of the chorus hammond (I hear more people saying it's very annoying)

To Kings:
Thanx for the compliment...well I've studied sound engineering so it's a possibility..allthought i must admid that I really do the least for my own mixes...i'm trying to improve song writing so i pay less attention to the quality of the songs...a bit of levelling and panning is all i do...just plug and play
The clinton samples were still from the first demo...it had to be about mankind destructing itself for example by war...but i changed the music a bit happier...but i wanted to keep it in anyhow to see how it went...quess I have to get rid of them

To teaguk:
The beginning should be offbeat...that's the ska ritme..althought i must admid it's hard to follow because of the fast ritme. Let me know if you found the song it reminded you off

Greetings!
Bob

Wisdom
Ska Ska Ska Ska Ska Ska!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awsome!
bring the heavy guitar. Man I love this makes want to jam.
Wow nice !
Cool arragenment after 2:00 break nice Bass

I have feelings, yes I do..
 
I have feelings, just not for you!!

I know you're not much different from the rest...

You always make me feel like I'm just second best...

So All I have to say to you is please leave me alone...

You can't make my heart race much faster then a stone..

So you see the Rock is just a Roll, As the rabbit disappears deep within his hole.

There's not much more that I want to say, So why can't you just turn and walk away..


ok bro. gotta finish it yourself or maybe someone else can add to it.. take your time and the lyrics do fit... I had to listen to it five or six times to be sure...

Blessings,

Dan

p.s. that was just off the top of my head.. so don't hold it against me! 

forgot to rate it..

blessings,

Dan

Man this is sounding good Bob
I like the Bass alot...Nice recording...a nice upbeat tune
Nice work...very creative with the vox....

Flyer

This song kicks ass . I love it. I don't see too much of a problem with the drums you have some change ups in it to keep um intersting.  i love the guitar sounds and the horns really add .  This has great energy very "UP" song.
I give this a high vote.

Ok...looking thru some older stuff since i'm stuck on new demo's


this song could use some good lyrics and vocal melody too...


please help me out here...:D:D:D


Greetings!!