This is my first collaboration job, and I'm so excited!

the song is call Lejos de Aqui (Faraway from here)

I added lyrics (voice) to the marino's music.

I want to thank to my mate Richardson for give me the chance to record in his studio (3CENUNO)

Dodo

here are the lyrics:

The sky closes, the clouds are found totally gray.  The noise terrifies me, the chaos does not expect and your shades are lost.  The rain and the war, the time that flies and where are you?  My blood surrounds a wall of stone where I believe that you are, where I believe you are

The moon expects a pact in the Herb that does not reach to see.  Thec old that arrives, my eyes close to reach your heat.  A shot sounds, I kiss the land and I fall next to you.  Two souls are found, they embrace with force and they go far from here


y ahora en español

El cielo se cierra, las nubes se encuentran totalmente grises.
El ruido me aterra, el caos no espera y se pierden tus matices.
La lluvia y la guerra, el tiempo que vuela y tu donde te metiste.
Mi sangre rodea un muro de piedra donde creo que estás
donde creo que estas

La luna espera un pacto en la Hierba que no alcanza a ver.
El frio que llega, mis ojos se cierran para alcanzar tu calor.
Un disparo suena, beso la tierra y caigo junto a tí.
Dos almas se encuentran, se abrazan con fuerza y se van lejos de aqui

Nice Dodo!
You sound a little insecure but it still sounds great.I'm glad that you got s shot at your first collab.Thx for taking the time to do this.Good Job. The mix and your vox sound are good!

I like it! The fact I liked the instrumental version helps your cause but I really like the lyrics!

The singing is good, but like Marino says you sound a little insecure, which I think with your voice you shouldn't be.

I can only hope it will remain to develop as time goes on!

This sure sounds good! The entirety sounds like an ace production - and you write some excellent lyrics. Uh yeah, so you could sound more confident, but what gives! It's a great song hell yeah!

Try singing it an octave higher if you can [could always use a forseto

I like the notes he sang it at . I think I tried to sing it to high  I like this it has a darkness to it that goes with the music. very good indeed.  You captured the feel of this.

 good job

       Greg

Those lyrics rock!!  And your vocals are awesome..  Like ToastedGoat said, it fits well with the Darkness..

  I Wish The Translation fully gave the meaning of the pyrics, because I feel they are much more powerful than Babelfish can muster!

         JimK

Hey.... this does sound GREAT!




-NT4M

Oh man, I'm surprised!

I really appreciate every comment, thanks to all of you!!

about the singing, I just can say, i feel the lyrics does fit well with the vocal level.

I could try to sing it higher but the lyrics talks about a suicide, this is not glam rock please! 

lol

i'll record a punk song to scream with all the air of my lungs

Cheers!!

ps. why the noodle kingdom don't say anything about the quality? is because this one is not a collab noodle?
I'll wait more comments from them...

Dodo

loved this when i first heard guitar invte to collab.........
didnt know how it might work out.........
this is great.............
well done dodo!!!!!
you give it feeling
lol the fish

Nice work here guys.. a good collaboration...Nice Vocals Dodosito...Marino

Flyer

Thank you Ralph, i'm glad you like it too

dodo

Rock on Dodo this is great man came back to listen again!