I'd like to know what people think of this song.  I know I don't quite hit the right notes here and there, but overall how do you like the song?

There are some pitch and a few timing issues, and at some points it seems as if the guitar is too quiet. The concept is good though, and I'm sure if you worked on those things it would sound great.

other than a the issues BackwardsHat mentioned the song it self is good.

Try micing the guitar a bit closer, and add a light compressor, maybe some reverb. And just to get rid of the sound of the room around you, you might wanna hang up bedsheets or something to isolate the guitar better.
Other than that I like the casual feel of this song.

wow i love this. i say leave it as it is. very cool. five stars out of five!

i love your voice and the lo-fi-yness just makes the song all the more cool, in my opinion.

I really like your vocal, I think you've recorded them well, I feel the tambourine could have been more 'intelligent' (if a tambourine could be intelligent!! lol), I thought the guitar was nice (quaint) except for the sound of the loom working in the background!
I think the lyric is fine but the chorus is lame, though I could get it as sarcasm I still think it could be stronger..

Hey guys, thanks for all the response!  It is appreciated.

BackwardsHat - thanks, I'll pay attention to those points in my next song.

Issue - thanks, I'll give the sheets and micing closer a try.

krg - thanks   I find myself going for the lo-fi effect more so than the hi-fi, I feel it has more personality, at least in my own music.  I appreciate the compliments.

kings - yeah I've never played or recorded a tambourine before, that was an experiment, haha.  Yeah my chorus is lame, no disagreements there, mine usually are, haha.  I'll work on that, thanks.

I like this song....nice lyrics...your vocals fit your style
I would make the guitar a bit louder from 1:36 TO 2:03
I think this is a good song all around....

Flyer

Very nice "feel" to this song! Your voice suits it well!