Real title: Everything is Beautiful, Nothing Hurts

Inspired by slaughterhouse-five. I'm not really all that happy with it, it's not really the kind of thing i would normally record and the lyrics are sub-sub-par. But...

Lyrics:
And I don't even want to know it began and I don't even want to know how it will end. All I really want to know is where I am. So it goes. The world's insane. So it goes. The war's still on. So it goes. Here comes the rain. So it goes. And on and on.

Everything is beautiful and nothing hurts. So it goes.

I don't think this is rap.

I think this is pretty good, however vocals a little too low in the mix earlier on, a few timing issues with the guitar.
Nice tune though, imo vocals don't have enough melody.

Not bad though.

WB

Yes, I agree with WritersBlock that there are a few timing issues with the guitar. I like that transition, it keeps the song interesting. Maybe a bass and drums should be added in the beginning though.

i don't have drums

lol

i used to put like hardcore drill n bass beats under my stuff, but i got sick of programming them, and it didn't sound that cool, anyway.

I like the idea it's good ....  needs a  little work could be greatly improved with the use of compressors to level (smooth)  the signals out some doesn't need much though overall good job.

I would agree with the points mentioned already. I think if were to have some sort rhythm in the giutar at the begining it would help with your timing