A song I sing...
When I feel like crap.

Very light in the instrumental department. For that the vocals also seemed out of place. A few pitch issues. Develop it a bit further and this could be very nice. It's just not there yet.

Cheers!

WB

Welcome to the Amp

Writer made some very good points about this song
Needs more work.....but it has potentail


Flyer

i agree with Writers block, but its just a lack of drums and bass. Im not very familiar with john frusciante but your voice does sort of sound like his which is cool. Its cool that you joined Bandamp because I like your style, just get more instruments.

Simplicity wow it works man
I hear the potential
Make something out of this it sounds promising

You've got the makings for a great song here. This is how a lot of my songs start out, as a bare bones recording. Get out your axe and start chopping.

I'd like drums here...would be a great song