here is my effort at putting vocals on Kines Wind blew us together


   I hope she don't mind... it isn't super great... I was trying for a dark yet semi humorous approach to it.. only because that is who I am... I have to bring some humour into everything I do...

    anyway... Here it is....  Thanks for stopping by!

                    JimK

Hey, THANKS!!! 

It's not what I had in mind, but it's good!

again.. THANKS for putting vocals on my song!   

Not a bad tune..I think you should leave out the strong guitar intro to this song..and pick it up on a more mellow lead later on in the song..more into the background is what I mean on the lead
around the 140 mark  sounds like it would make a good intro...with the vocals hitting a little more later then you have at that time and point into the song...your vocals seem to be reverbed to much to me Jim..and to far in the background..reverse the vocal volume with the guitar volume..more on the vocals  less on the lead guitar...but these are only my thoughts on this work
I cant really make out the lyrics..its a nice melody
nice work

Flyer