#1February 19th, 2007 · 06:09 PM
10 threads / 10 songs
34 posts
United States of America
Even Trade
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This song is not in a battle


This was one of the first songs I recorded when I started home recording 7 or so years ago. It's gone through a lot of evolution over the years, I think this is the final version.

This was also the title track of a CD I released several years ago (though the version on that CD had not evolved into what the song has become, though the actual mix was better).

Of the songs that I've posted here, this is, if not my favorite, close to it.

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#2February 20th, 2007 · 04:16 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Nice vocals, a bit off in places, but not too bad (that drop in tone at the end of a phrase). Nice guitar, nice flow in places, although I think the little break riff part is a little out of place with the flow of the rest (just a little though). Vocals at 4:00 Woah, push it out man! Nice. Great solos in there too. Wicked! I'd like to see this with your ideal mix.

Cool man, I'll vote and put to playlist.
Good job, wicked song (comments are really nitpicky, sorry)

Cheers

WB
#3February 20th, 2007 · 05:31 AM
66 threads / 66 songs
153 posts
Italy
good atmosphere, reminds me Police. jack
#4February 20th, 2007 · 05:49 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Love it when you let it go!
It's Floydian even though your vocal is as such not 'effected''
I do agree with WBs main comment, tighten this up, tune your vocals (in the bits that are not as tight. lol) and this would be even more rockin' than it is now!
Keep em rollin, I like where I hear you going to! 
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