A gentle song, with some good flowing mood...
You should feel some kind of backspine shiver just after the intro and in the chorus...
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Pump the volume over 5/10.

That is some awesome stuff. I was captured by the first 30 seconds of the song. Probably one of the best I have heard. Great quality and then it jumps out at you.  Just a great song!!

This is a great tune. I enjoyed every minute. Nice power and dynamics. Great vocals, though a little buried in the mix. I'd like to check out some more stuff. Nice job!!!

Drowned vocals are almost an artistic choice...You'll get soon some other tunes... It depends on how much you'll like this first tune....:-D..Thanks for your advice anyway. I'd like to know what kind of things you'd change...
Please notice that the dynamic variations are absolutely played. There's no volume nor gain action. Bye.

Very nice song.

i agree with stormy. very nice. the back up vocals work well. that is something which is too often overlooked, I think. I also second the point about dynamics - they keep one's attention. well done.

Great song the best one I have herd so far everything mixes great together great tempo I can really relax listening to this song sooo when are you going to have a concert or when can I bye your C.D.? Really good song!!!!

Great song!

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Very good!  This sounds like something I would hear on the radio.  I've noticed that some people complain about "Buried vocals," but it seems to bring all the instruments together in a wonderful way.  This probably wouldn't have been possible if the vocals were a step above the rest in the mix.  Wonderful piece.

Nice work over all - I especially enjoyed the drumming, vocals, and dynamics.  The ending solo sounds kind of Weezeresque and it makes me feel as though I am running dry.

Hey, really amazing verse! The rythmic playing on one of the guitars is really cool! Beautiful song! Good job.

i'm not so sure!  i thought they were fine.  maybe it's just me :P

I was hoping this song would place in the battle!  makes me happy to see that it did.  great job!

Even though the guitar is nice and simple, It sounds amazing. Love it. Sounds professional

I wrote alot on this but then the comp crashed and I'm tired so forgive me for not writing it again. Basicly, great song which rightfully owned its place.