Dunno why I'm calling this Track 10.  I think it was track 10 on a CD I burned of stuff that I'd written to listen to in the car (my favorite place to listen and critique new tracks).

No lyrics here again.   That's where I'm always deficient.  If you're a Rush fan, you'll definitely hear the influence here (think "Analog Kid" -- I didn't realize this until later).  The bass on this track, in parts (particular what will be the second verse) is some of the best playing and sound I've gotten out of my bass.

rhythm guitar is out of tune.

Otherwise, great playing, nice tune. This is very 80's.

Huh.  I think I have a pretty good ear, but I don't hear it out of tune...the same guitar was used on all tracks without adjustment .  Could you give a time when its most obvious?  Which rhythm guitar, btw?  There are several  
Anything I can do to improve would be much appreciated

in bandamp this sounds flat
eq drab
needs panning
doh............thr playing is good ...................the  mix aint


fiish

It seems a bit wild and unfocused, but it sounds cool.