Weird.  The first time I uploaded this, there was nothing.  Odd.
Hopefully fixed now.

I have a chorus for this and that's it, and there's some level issues at the beginning, as I'm not sure exactly what I want to do with the guitar there yet.

I really dig the feel of this.  I like how it breaks down with bass plunking away.  very clean but funky...and a good bit of a "metal" feel.

I really dig this.  Good Job.

cool sound, solo is nice, could scale a little more to give it sort of a climax

I like this song it has potential, the only thing for me was I kept hearing that song(don't know the name).........
Breath In...Breath Out ....... are words in the song though....  otherwise good song...




edit: I think the song is by BUSH

Holy cow.  I never thought of that, but yeah, I can definitely hear that Bush song in there a little.  Personally, this song has always reminded me a little of Queensryche, particular the variation in the last bar of the second chorus.

I think the song sounds good.Never heard the bush song.But there's defenetly some weird panning  cut off' in the mp3.Not sure why.I also find the drums a little low in volume.

I think that the panning is a result of the encoding.  It was encoded at 56kB, and it played 2x too fast, so I had to convert it to wav, then encode at 128kB.  There's a weird thing going on with a cymbal sound on the left side that I don't hear on the track on my PC.  I'm going to need to find the original, I think.