here's another song. not studio quality, but im tryin'

Viva power metal.Some mix and sound issues but you'll get there.Work with you vox a some more some of it is way out of time.Drums are way to low.

Absolutely! If you made this your self, I'm impressed.
It is a whole complete song, I would have liked to have heard words as strong as the music, but that's me!
'Paper bag' doesent do it to me!
There are songs where one can say "A yes the rough recording gives the song the right ambiance" but this is not one of those songs, I think this type of music must be produced/created as tightly as the guitar is played!
Good show though!

The riff (particularly the start, with the buildup) reminds me of the Sum 41 instrumental Grab the devil by the horns. I agree a good recording would make this wicked. Vocal style not my cup of tea, but suits metal, but I'm glad to see the structure is better than The Mind. Quite enjoyable. I dig the main riff.

Great song.

WB