Don't have a title or lyrics for this yet.
Something I worked on a little while ago, that came about while I was playing with a new floorboard for my amp.

No wonder 2112 I hear your rush influence.The arpeggio guitar is to loud compared to the other instruments.It sounds separate.There's also a timing issue in about 2:00(it sped up a bit)

This reminds me alot of Rushes YYZ. I like the guitar at around 3:13-3:40. Maybe get some lyrics and it would some good. Just make sure they go. Listen to Nirvana's Smells like Teen Sprit, Heart Shapped Box, and Some more Rush. Great job, I'd say a 3.

_Daniel

I don't think its possible for me to listen to more Rush
I've never really liked Nirvana, so if you hear that in there, I wouldn't be able to tell you where it is.  I did like the Melvins, though, so there's that.

ok its a noodle
as a noodle its ok
splash the fish

I don't know what that means.