Latest song in a while. Not too happy with the vocals, sort of sloppy, but better than alot of my stuff so I'm pretty happy with it.

Lyrics:
Rising sun shines through my window
Melanin burning me awake
I can’t get my eyes open
though the alarm is blaring me away
And I feel that I am normal
So very normal
...Normal
And I feel that I’m painless
So very painless
...Shameless

And every day
It seems the same
To me
X2
Oh what is life?
Oh what is life?
To you
When every day
It seems the same
To you

Drive to school
See many people
People I have known all of life
Wasting time
With many faces
Faces that I don’t really even like
And I feel that I’m normal
So very normal
…normal.


And every day
It seems the same
To me
Oh what is life?
Oh what is life?
To you
When every day
It seems the same
To you

the music fits nicely with the werds...
it carries the mood well...

your singing has the melody but it falls a bit flat here...
you should strive to improve your range or tweak it a bit with effects...

i like the organ feeling, goes well with the 'normal' line...

I like the song itself, as well as the lyrics.  I think that the singing sounds a little awkward...perhaps trying to synch with the beat when it's not really necessary.  Overall, though, a great sound.

As I said before.Way cool writting skills.
Man this is like your own stuff with a touch of REM which I personaly consider an exelent song writting band.Great hooks in this song.What are you doing with all this Theo you should get this out there.Another high vote!Vocal melody gets extra credit (Off at times but I hear where you are going with it)and is awesome

More good stuff - but with vocals this time!

Not so keen on the actual song, it feels like it drags on a bit - but it's a personal thing, nothing to do with the composition, which is well put together.

The vocals are clear and crisp (if a touch "wobbly" at times ), as is all the instrumentation.  I like the vocal harmonies, and the choice of instruments.

Nice work