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#1February 12th, 2007 · 02:26 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
6 posts
Please vote for this song !
Current votes: 17 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2007-03

From the upcoming album "Goodbye Blue Monday", produced by Hawksley Workman.  You can also check out a self-animated video for this song here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGn0q1zoibw


Here are the lyrics:

It keeps you up
From the back of your mind
To the tip of your tongue
Reaching out lookin for mine

I値l be your cigarette
Light me up and get on with it
I値l be hard to forget
Good or bad I知 just a habit
Good or bad I知 just your habit

Sweet relief
That痴 what you come and get from me
I give up everytime
You want it you got it I知 burnin down


And you try to put me down
Everytime you come back around
And you try to put me away
Tell yourself you値l kick it someday


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#2February 12th, 2007 · 02:31 PM
14 threads / 9 songs
90 posts
United States of America
I like this
Everything about this song is good; the vocals and lyrics, and the music.
I look forward to hearing more
#3February 12th, 2007 · 02:35 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
I have to add this to my playlist
Nothing more to say

#4February 12th, 2007 · 03:05 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,802 posts
I like the second verse and the vocal technique which follows in the second chorus. successful song.... ready for TV

professional recording. congrats. awesome composition

btw watched the Jolene vid...  thats great man. you are a true artist! go ahead.
#5February 12th, 2007 · 03:11 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Beautiful work Very Pro sound.
Vox arrangements are incredible.
Out there yet?
#6February 12th, 2007 · 03:23 PM
15 threads / 12 songs
171 posts
United Kingdom
Music: Spot on.
Video: Few little changes and it'll be great!
#7February 12th, 2007 · 04:35 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,372 posts
United Kingdom
This is my third review since I signed up, It just keeps getting better. Good all round quality composition.
If there was any critisism I would have raised your vocals slightly in the mix. Your vocals are what most people will be listening for, Something somebody told me recenty who is a supurb songwriter.
#8February 12th, 2007 · 04:39 PM
159 threads / 14 songs
2,309 posts
United Kingdom
re: Cigarette
Done Job..............

Good Luck Its Real Nice


Lighting up Now
#9February 13th, 2007 · 09:42 AM
i LOVE cigarettes..lol
good concept.
#10February 14th, 2007 · 02:39 AM
10 threads / 10 songs
34 posts
United States of America
Very nice sound, awesome production quality.
#11February 22nd, 2007 · 11:27 AM
1 posts
"hey-hey! hey! whoooa..." This song is fantastic; i love it!! I heard it for the first time yesterday and it has been in my head since...most likely because I can't stop listening to it. It's addictive like cigarettes =)Awesome lyrics. Awesome vocals. I like the repetition of the last two lines in the chorus it's a nice touch. Actually there is nothing I don't like about the song.
#12February 22nd, 2007 · 12:21 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
ok ok
I love this song..I have played it like 10 times in a row here...everytime  I hear it  I light up..And it wont stop Playing...your cruel Jeremy

Love it

#13February 22nd, 2007 · 12:26 PM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
This is beautiful.
#14February 22nd, 2007 · 02:22 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
3 posts
United Kingdom

Great sound on the acoustic guitar.

If I was writing it though I'd change to the key of the verse midway through the chorus with a couple of different chords, as a major to minor hook.
#15February 22nd, 2007 · 09:20 PM
16 threads / 15 songs
44 posts
United States of America
This is pretty cool. I like your voice.
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