Cigarette |
From the upcoming album "Goodbye Blue Monday", produced by Hawksley Workman. You can also check out a self-animated video for this song here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGn0q1zoibw
www.myspace.com/jeremyfisher
Here are the lyrics:
It keeps you up
From the back of your mind
To the tip of your tongue
Reaching out lookin for mine
Chorus:
I値l be your cigarette
Light me up and get on with it
I値l be hard to forget
Good or bad I知 just a habit
Good or bad I知 just your habit
Sweet relief
That痴 what you come and get from me
I give up everytime
You want it you got it I知 burnin down
Chorus
And you try to put me down
Everytime you come back around
And you try to put me away
Tell yourself you値l kick it someday
Chorus
www.myspace.com/jeremyfisher
Here are the lyrics:
It keeps you up
From the back of your mind
To the tip of your tongue
Reaching out lookin for mine
Chorus:
I値l be your cigarette
Light me up and get on with it
I値l be hard to forget
Good or bad I知 just a habit
Good or bad I知 just your habit
Sweet relief
That痴 what you come and get from me
I give up everytime
You want it you got it I知 burnin down
Chorus
And you try to put me down
Everytime you come back around
And you try to put me away
Tell yourself you値l kick it someday
Chorus
I like this
Everything about this song is good; the vocals and lyrics, and the music.
I look forward to hearing more
Everything about this song is good; the vocals and lyrics, and the music.
I look forward to hearing more
I like the second verse and the vocal technique which follows in the second chorus. successful song.... ready for TV
professional recording. congrats. awesome composition
*edit*
btw watched the Jolene vid... thats great man. you are a true artist! go ahead.
professional recording. congrats. awesome composition
*edit*
btw watched the Jolene vid... thats great man. you are a true artist! go ahead.
This is my third review since I signed up, It just keeps getting better. Good all round quality composition.
If there was any critisism I would have raised your vocals slightly in the mix. Your vocals are what most people will be listening for, Something somebody told me recenty who is a supurb songwriter.
If there was any critisism I would have raised your vocals slightly in the mix. Your vocals are what most people will be listening for, Something somebody told me recenty who is a supurb songwriter.
i LOVE cigarettes..lol
good concept.
good concept.
"hey-hey! hey! whoooa..." This song is fantastic; i love it!! I heard it for the first time yesterday and it has been in my head since...most likely because I can't stop listening to it. It's addictive like cigarettes =)Awesome lyrics. Awesome vocals. I like the repetition of the last two lines in the chorus it's a nice touch. Actually there is nothing I don't like about the song.
This is beautiful.
Fantastic.
Great sound on the acoustic guitar.
If I was writing it though I'd change to the key of the verse midway through the chorus with a couple of different chords, as a major to minor hook.
Great sound on the acoustic guitar.
If I was writing it though I'd change to the key of the verse midway through the chorus with a couple of different chords, as a major to minor hook.
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