Kind of cheesy in the lyrics department.  I sort of make the words up as I go along, go back, do it over, until I have something that kind of makes sense.  Recorded about three years ago in my basement.

If you would have given the vocal some sparkle like the instruments I would have really enjoyed this, as it is I enjoyed it, and thank you for that.
Have you learned enough in the last 3 years to 'tighten and brighten' it? if you were to record it again.
The 'cheesy' lyric works, it does it's job well, "We all need someone to rely on" is nice to hear!

My recording skills have definitely improved over the last few years, but my equipment has not
A 24-bit multitracker can lead to a more dull, muddled sound at times.