Another FL studios song, although it's not yet finished (it still needs vox) please critique.

Love to hear where it goes.Sounds cool. I find the keys a little loud but sure like the music breaks with the bass.

Ok what you clearly have here is a start at the body of what could become a very powerful song. I like the basic verse-melody, and I LOVE how it starts to bridge into something else - - - then that something else doesn't come. Would I suggest to build further after the change ... Into a whole new part, instead of repeating what is already there. Because what is there is pretty strong, that's why it's the obvious first choice to simply repeat it a couple of times, but it would be much stronger if it was part of a bigger whole , ... I am really stating the obvious here....

That is it would be too bad if it wouldn't build out into something more. I like the melancholic synthified mood of this - please turn it into what it screams for to become!

movie track for "Rocky 17" perhaps

PX I disagree with you completely!
You are being extremely male in your approach to this piece of music!
It's such a feminine piece, drifting and weaving, though with a strong current!
I do hear it could 'go somewhere', but then as I said that's so very 'male'