here u go another loop made in class
not very good
LOADS of mistakes
no vox
but still hope you like it

Hey pap... you mention your songs are made in class.. does that mean, made specifically for music class...or .. on a laptop (or something), why you were actually supposed to follow class instead?

Well I like it, it sounds very contemporary, I like the scratching... Waay too short though... Seriously needs to build up to a good ending... Requires vox... Pretty cool stuff anyway - next step = try working with the stereo image, all sounds are coming from dead center, seems this is a mono track. Nothing wrong with lo-fi as a genre tho

lol i know its to short
and it needs vox wich i might do later on if i can think up some lyrics for it
amd yeah its a mono track
i donno
maybe ill fix that to
but this is what i got in five minuts of work
so this is what you get lol

Definitely 'kikin pups'! 
I really like that guitar! Very sweet!
Is it actually a loop or just made in Loopy?
O! and that Hmm bass! Lovely!
But it's not rebellious enough for your lyrics from the lyric review!

yeah this ones pritty mellow and kicked back. it was origonally called "kickin it" but i didnt like it to much. this reminds me of sitting back with a bunch of lit candles in you your room while talking on the phone about deep thoughts with your best friend and relaxing all at one while breathing in the insance and what not lol

why are your endings so abrupt???

girl, dont make me crazy

Just when I begin to listen.... it stops

*EDIT*
could swear I ve heard that rhythm somewhere....

pap u make music.!!!!!!!!
well done this a long awaited mile stone or me and u!!!!!!
i am truly happy with this
keep on composing

ok its short ..... i understand .................sounds great though

more

the fish

Dig the name...it is a little short, but that's not a critique as much as an observation.  Besides, how much time do ya really need to kick a pup?  I hate dogs!

I like it , your getting some good songs together. maybe  expand on it some more.

This is a cool song, I'm home from school, I can kick back and relax to this...
Ahhhhh.......             life is good.

As for making music in class, I think that's awesome, I may start making some "class music" myself soon (there's been talk of putting some original music onto a disc alongside the yearbook).

Keep 'em coming.

Cheers!

WB

aww thanks you guys good news we might have some sponcers that might by ipods for the kids in my class! how cool is that and its all because of band amp! lol i showed it to them and they loved it!

great news.......... show sponcers the amp........ thats very cool

distinguished amp medal ................... A DAM haha

splashhhhhhhhhhhh

the fish

*green eyed monster right here*
 

wow, that's a bitchin drum beat

bitchin = good