its a song with chorus and a little blues solo with my electric guitar but the sound its not very gound because im not very good with Sonar4.

juge me not by de quality of audio but the quality of the song

Wow... I like it!!!  

Nice to listen to.... has allot of potetial I think...

Could use some vocals & maybe a drum like...

I'd like to hear more!.....Very nice tune!......

somewhere after 2:0 - 2:15 could be a little softer..but I know nothing of music! grin.

-NT4M

good game calisse it's pretty interesting, can't wait to put the piano-piano riff in your song babe ! 

you got the thumbs up from Grim

i thinks my song its better than your song lol . heum not i think, i'm sure ^^

hahaha lol jk you can build a great song but not with patrick's piano-piano because is sh*t

next time body Bye

This is my first review. The first thing I saw was dont judge me on the sound quality. Well I.m a very honest person and If we are to all improve, we must be able to accept constructive critisism. This is muy humble opinion friend

You see music putting it simply music is 'SOUND'. So you owe it to yourself to invest time in learning how to get the best 'sound' out of your software and instrument. I hope I don't sound too harsh, but belive me the most positive thing you will get out of doing this , is that when you hear a good sound it will inspire you to improve, and most of all you will get an almighty 'BUZZ'

so its wellcome to bandamp from me
Hi
this is a basic track
Im sure you agree..........
nice but has some recording and tuning issues
more please

but check your levels (sound) as you layer up

splash

good sound

clipping at start
and it doesnt go away .............its that blurry sound on your rhythm guitar
caused by recording (gain) levels being too high
your recording program should show this in its meters going red
the clipping effect in digital recording is most uncomfortable ..........blurred sound
the solo guitar doesnt suffer from this so much..........however it does drop some truly non tune notes

sounds like a little jam with your recorder
not sensual yet........loads of jokes here ....... but no
I think thats fair

ok lol

the fish

you are not only not good with sonar4. your skills in guitar playing and recording are not the best. go and study some techniques, some rhythm feeling and then come back and present what you've learned. What you showed to me it's quite simple. Every beginner plays these chords. I did this as well but I didnt let the audience have a listen to what I am not ready for.

All in all a nice piece

wow i know this is very simple but im just startiing to compose music. just lets me a chance pleas and for my wrost quality of sound ,its my guitar volume.its to high. i would try to make a good sound next time but all off my friend have listened this, like it. if you dont like it its not my problem


Peace ^^

Song is Ok but there is some mayor clipping going on.Hope you can fix it soon!I'm sure you will ,keep working at it and you'll get it.

the song is okay i give you a 6/10 somewhere around 2:09 and wiht the electric guitar, i didn't like so much

Not bad for just starting....... stay with it you'll get better....... read the manuals on your recording stuff it'll help