A song of longing and searching.

I would like to hear some more instruments in this one. Melody's good, and the intentional tempo change is cool and interesting. Get your hands on some good recording gear.

You have potential. But need to work more on recording what you want. I guess you don't have equipment to do better. Nice try, I like it. Keep rockin' and good luck.

good but quite novice-level.
I don't think that intentional tempo change 's a good idea. Try keeping it on multiples of the original tempo. Or work on some different right-hand phrasing.
Try to keep lyrics in a correct syllable partition. Get some rythm in them also.

Good work, anyway. Keep up.