Just another one.

again the sounds are right... production sounds clean...
the guitar pings a bit sometimes when you strum or maybe
it's just my computer... but overall, simple, nice...

Had a listen, and it's as great as your other stuff!
Maybe the fade on the Harmonica could be done better but that's the only critism I could think of         

this one is crazy catchy, love the bounciness of it! i then went back and listened to all your posts. you have the whole package, great singing voice, absorbing lyrics, really hummable melodic guitar lines. i love your style... are you a touring musician? would like to see you play live in person. keep them coming king benny.

Thanks for the comments. Syntax, I play locally here in Minnesota/North Dakota sometimes, but thats about it. I love the hobbyist writing/recording mostly. Enjoyed listening to a few of your tunes on here.

really nice...lemme listen again, and try to think of something useful to say :-) i love the softness of your voice, and  it makes me want to hear it get pushed to be a bit more assertive at some point as contrast...but that may be just me, and may take away some of the 'loveliness' that is the backbone...the entry of the harmonica does seem to want to drop in some assertion, but it moves back again quickly, which makes for a nice kind of tentativeness. Golly though, a really, really nice song.

Jeff

everytime when I see your new posts I know there is something good behind.
And this one is good again. Nice and easy listening. Makes me wave my body to the rhythm.
Good job. Recorsing quality is great.

The is absolutely a remarkable song!!!!I really love the organic feel on this track...Those lyrics are magical and your voice suits them well...This is for me more a poem longing that and actual song....Great great great track,did I say great already wow!!!!!!This needs more comments on it!!!!!! Its deserving!!!!