Just a little noodle with my new mandolin. Once again proof there is that I cannot sing for beans But it was pretty fun to do...

Jeff

Sounds to me familiar...It's very sweet and the sound of the mandoline is just perfect:) The lead motive is great! I love it! And.. about singing... you know. It's not so bad, but you have to work on it. Good luck and an inspiration!)

i agree with joanadakel. the tone of the mandolin sounds awesome. i like the way you build up to the violin part on this one. as for the vocals, i liked it, you're definitely improving as you record more. i've always thought that as long as there is emotion in the performance any technical limitations will be generally overlooked. not that i noticed any technical limitations in this piece 

the only suggestion i'd make would be to change the colour of the synthy bass line. it kinda sounds out of place with all the "organic" colours you chose for the other instrumentation, but maybe this was by design?

I really like this, it builds up into a wonderful place, I would have liked to have stayed there a little longer though!
Whats wrong with your voice?
Sounds like a not drunk/soberish Shane McGowan!
So what I'm saying is, get drunk, do the song again, go for it on the vocals, have even more fun and maybe even  produce something that's totally out of this world! 

[edit]Ha! I just noticed, then it could honestly be called 'falling down' 

great choice of instruments. nice arrangement
again I must tell you that your voice needs work. but in this tune it doesnt sound bad. it fits the song really.