#1January 18th, 2007 · 03:29 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
28 posts
Sweden
Again
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Please vote for this song !
Current votes: 11 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2007-02


[verse1]
In the autumn-winter rain
I followed you in vain
The searching of another
Like a blind man with his kane
In the dark December cold
We all need someone to hold
For warmth and for affection
and all that, so I'm told

[chorus]
Again, again and again
I'm running into the wall
When I'm looking in the mirror
Why do I feel so small?
Again, again and again
I am lying on the floor
contemplating yesterday
Why am I trying again at all?

[verse2]
In the mirror of abuse
I'm not looking at my youth
my future in a shining
crystal ball of truth
It's hard to see what's real
what's likely to appeal
the bathroom is still spinning
It's time to walk away

[chorus]
Again, again and again
I'm running into the wall
When I'm looking in the mirror
Why do I feel so small?
Again, again and again
I am lying on the floor
contemplating yesterday
Why am I trying again at all?

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#2January 18th, 2007 · 04:16 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
nice job....everything sounds great..........nothing out of the box..I have about 8 or 9 songs running through my mind that sound almost exactly like this....no points for creativity....... 7 out of 10....I vote...
#3January 18th, 2007 · 05:53 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Cool song' I really liked it! ok, because I've read BCs comment I could say, Yea, you right! It does sound like a 'cliche' song, but I still like it. It made me happy and wobbly!
The only thing that kind of 'nudged' me was : 'contemplating yesterday'
It would be good to find a better fitting line, but one that means the same.
#4January 18th, 2007 · 07:15 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
106 posts
United States of America
Good Rock Tune
This is a good rock song, no doubt it sounds like a lot of other songs but here's the difference- You wrote it!! I like the riff. Its catchy. I would have liked the vocals to be a bit stronger, there's no attitude in the delivery. Put some punch in it and this is ready for MTV.
#5January 19th, 2007 · 12:34 AM
6 threads
138 posts
India
good song construction. the chorus is excellent. the ending i guess could be changed but sounds good as it is. good stuff, keep it up.

i vote
#6January 19th, 2007 · 08:23 AM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,063 posts
Netherlands
I liked it, and it's well done recording wise. A popular sound likely to be found in a certain type of college / slasher movies... Like Buffy the Vampyre Slayer. Could use a bit more "bite" for that still, but hey... It's enjoyable and the chorus is well thought of. The ending too abrupt.

7 out of 10, as Basketcase said, I can agree, I give you half a point more
#7January 24th, 2007 · 08:29 AM
18 threads / 15 songs
147 posts
Italy
I like this tune 'cos each instrument is well played and preserves its own dynamic range and clarity.
Not exactly my genre but it's a good job!
#8February 2nd, 2007 · 10:01 AM
7 threads / 7 songs
29 posts
United States of America
great tune
i really liked it i would love to write a song like that great job
#9February 2nd, 2007 · 08:36 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
hi
This is nice...I like the sound..good beat..nice lyrics also..Gotta love the chorus..this has kinda classic sound to it....real nice job here
Gets a good rating from me

Flyer
#10February 3rd, 2007 · 01:02 PM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
tyte! nice one not much to say...
#11February 3rd, 2007 · 06:29 PM
9 threads / 7 songs
30 posts
China
Good song! Nothing more to it, a nice, well played song, nice melody, rustic voice, topy!. it stops rather abruptly though.
#12February 3rd, 2007 · 08:26 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Good rock pop song.I know a lot of people play stuff like this.But it works and it sells.GREAT JOB!Vox are low in the mix for my taste,and there's a drop in volume in the verses
#13February 3rd, 2007 · 09:41 PM
158 threads / 13 songs
2,303 posts
United Kingdom
re: Again
hey this is good

well proportioned dance/pop tune

the mix is a bit flat though and could do with a bit of edge (eq on the voice to lift it further out of the band)

a little movement in the panning might be nice too it all sounds a bit central

i like it

i vote

the fish
#14February 9th, 2007 · 12:43 PM
nice song son....
#15February 26th, 2007 · 10:36 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,952 posts
United States of America
I like it there is nothing wrong with cookie cutter music if it's good .... and this is good  the vocals are well done this sounds like it was done at a studio  the harmonies and guitar tones are excellent the only thing i didn't like was the sound of the snare ( to dull) for this type of song.  great job on this one
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