Ok...  I tried, and I tried.... and I TRIED to get the vocals sounding better.... unfortunately, I think I don't have the pipes for it.... but here it is, my second attempt...  I have uploaded the Music only to my website, the url is HERE, just right click this and choose "save link as", to download it Hopefully, someone (hint hint ToastedGoat) with more of a rock type set of lungs might pick it up and try it....

  Anyaway... Enjoy....  or not....

                  JimK

love the effects on your voice. The biting guitar sounds cool.  Love the fact that you just free form your timing  somewhat.  I need to do more of that,  tend to get down on myself if I get just a little out of time.  There is a singer and I can't remember his name in a fairly well known punk band that you sound like with the effects on. They had some songs on the college radio.

                                                                               Good job.
                                                                                          Greg

 PS:  I might take a stab at it after I get done with  the final touches on the other one.

nice song

Ha Jim - I noticed that when you sing, you sing at a pitch so high, you are well above your comfort range! But that said I think you did well with the effects, this sounds like a weird underground wave/noise experiment which would instigate youthful alternativelings into frenzied raving.

Well, good job!

Cool octaver sound on the Ax and vox effect'