#1January 14th, 2007 · 05:20 PM
119 threads / 90 songs
258 posts
United Kingdom
(dont) Lose Your Head
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This song is not in a battle


Argh, I've tried to upload this like 3 times n it keeps sayin I've already got a song with the same name
Hope it works this time.

She is up, She is down.
Why are you still here?
She is off, on a whim.
Why dya persevere?

Don't tell me,
You're in love.
Don't tell me,
You're in love.

Don't lose your head now honey,
I wont let ya.
Don't lose your head now honey,
I wont let ya.

God help ya, If you're in love.
(Well you're a fool in love. A fool in love)
God help ya, If you're in love.
(Well you're a fool in love. A fool in love)

Don't lose your head now honey,
I wont let ya.
Don't lose your head now honey,
I wont let ya.
x 2

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#2January 14th, 2007 · 08:02 PM
9 threads / 9 songs
33 posts
United Kingdom
(Don't) Lose Your Head
Yet again one of yours I love.  Your harmonies are really good; you have the voice for it so they don't sound too similar.  Maybe a less busy drum track would be better for a song like this - but absolutly love your vocals.  I also prefer lyrics in this style, sort of all there for you - how it is.  And how it is sounds good !!!!........ definetly more please 
#3January 15th, 2007 · 02:40 AM
6 threads
138 posts
India
nice song. vocals are really good. the only thing that i find a bit out of place, are the bass beats. you should keep a lower profile on them. i am talking about those sort of triple beats. other than that the song is excellent. 

i vote.
#4January 15th, 2007 · 02:47 AM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
hey....
I actually like this one alot....   I think this is one of my fav's of yours... 

      It fits your voice well...

             The ending is cool....  I kind of disagree on the bass, I think it fits well....  At first It is kind of in your face, but then you kind of realize, it's good to be in your face like that... fits the mood well....

                        JimK

 i vote too... 
#5January 15th, 2007 · 04:01 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Yes, this is a nice song. Well written. What can I say, I agree with jimk. This one is going in my playlist. I follow the lead of nobster and jimk,
I vote too also!   

WB
#6January 15th, 2007 · 07:10 AM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
very cool - this is the stuff. nice and catchy, your ever so sweet vocals with great harmonies and occasional effects, the guitar and minimalist backing track all very well done. I like the bass line a lot.

it's short though, but it fits this tune. if you plan to make it longer it would require additional verses and plot changes, which I wouldn't know how to fit in anyway. it's complete as it is.... I can feel the possibilities for a phat club remix of some sorts for this one...

ace!
#7January 16th, 2007 · 01:02 AM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
Well done!
I fell inlove with your voice 
it's a really nice song!
#8January 16th, 2007 · 06:48 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
I'm in love!

Head? what head? I see no head!

No seriously, I'm in love!

I think nobster should be hung drawn and quartered, publicly! for having said such blasphemous things as "bass beats. you should keep a lower profile on them" Aaaa! Grrrr!
Those are the most wonderful double bass beats!

Beautifully written
Beautifully sung
Beautifully played

I told you, I'm in love!
#9January 17th, 2007 · 09:43 AM
6 threads
138 posts
India
kings wrote…
I think nobster should be hung drawn and quartered, publicly! for having said such blasphemous things as "bass beats. you should keep a lower profile on them" Aaaa! Grrrr!
Those are the most wonderful double bass beats!
LOL

well who doesn't love double bass beats.......if i had a double bass pedal i would sleep on it 

its just that they were in the face to me in this song.........but bad at all......that's all........

and the blasphemy.........well i am on my knees........

and as for kings...........now where is my...........Katana..........

cheers
#10July 5th, 2007 · 11:42 AM
1 threads
9 posts
United States of America
Nice!
This is just lovely! I don't see a problem anywhere, Fabulous! I'm adding you
#11July 7th, 2007 · 05:36 PM
59 threads / 56 songs
162 posts
Netherlands
great song!why are you not signed yet?..beautifull vocals(as usual)..(distorted part!!)
gitar(after 20sec)/snaredrum..could be louder,,,BIG potenital..why so short?

good luck
#12July 7th, 2007 · 05:39 PM
59 threads / 56 songs
162 posts
Netherlands
bdw...love the beat!
#13September 28th, 2007 · 09:10 AM
7 threads / 5 songs
52 posts
United States of America
wow . this is a nice little tune you got there two thumbs way up
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