Argh, I've tried to upload this like 3 times n it keeps sayin I've already got a song with the same name
Hope it works this time.

She is up, She is down.
Why are you still here?
She is off, on a whim.
Why dya persevere?

Don't tell me,
You're in love.
Don't tell me,
You're in love.

Don't lose your head now honey,
I wont let ya.
Don't lose your head now honey,
I wont let ya.

God help ya, If you're in love.
(Well you're a fool in love. A fool in love)
God help ya, If you're in love.
(Well you're a fool in love. A fool in love)

Don't lose your head now honey,
I wont let ya.
Don't lose your head now honey,
I wont let ya.
x 2

Yet again one of yours I love.  Your harmonies are really good; you have the voice for it so they don't sound too similar.  Maybe a less busy drum track would be better for a song like this - but absolutly love your vocals.  I also prefer lyrics in this style, sort of all there for you - how it is.  And how it is sounds good !!!!........ definetly more please 

nice song. vocals are really good. the only thing that i find a bit out of place, are the bass beats. you should keep a lower profile on them. i am talking about those sort of triple beats. other than that the song is excellent. 

i vote.

I actually like this one alot....   I think this is one of my fav's of yours... 

      It fits your voice well...

             The ending is cool....  I kind of disagree on the bass, I think it fits well....  At first It is kind of in your face, but then you kind of realize, it's good to be in your face like that... fits the mood well....

                        JimK

 i vote too... 

Yes, this is a nice song. Well written. What can I say, I agree with jimk. This one is going in my playlist. I follow the lead of nobster and jimk,
I vote too also!   

WB

very cool - this is the stuff. nice and catchy, your ever so sweet vocals with great harmonies and occasional effects, the guitar and minimalist backing track all very well done. I like the bass line a lot.

it's short though, but it fits this tune. if you plan to make it longer it would require additional verses and plot changes, which I wouldn't know how to fit in anyway. it's complete as it is.... I can feel the possibilities for a phat club remix of some sorts for this one...

ace!

Well done!
I fell inlove with your voice 
it's a really nice song!

I'm in love!

Head? what head? I see no head!

No seriously, I'm in love!

I think nobster should be hung drawn and quartered, publicly! for having said such blasphemous things as "bass beats. you should keep a lower profile on them" Aaaa! Grrrr!
Those are the most wonderful double bass beats!

Beautifully written
Beautifully sung
Beautifully played

I told you, I'm in love!

LOL

well who doesn't love double bass beats.......if i had a double bass pedal i would sleep on it 

its just that they were in the face to me in this song.........but bad at all......that's all........

and the blasphemy.........well i am on my knees........

and as for kings...........now where is my...........Katana..........

cheers

This is just lovely! I don't see a problem anywhere, Fabulous! I'm adding you

great song!why are you not signed yet?..beautifull vocals(as usual)..(distorted part!!)
gitar(after 20sec)/snaredrum..could be louder,,,BIG potenital..why so short?

good luck

bdw...love the beat!

wow . this is a nice little tune you got there two thumbs way up