It is song about how is our world is false and unfair. This song about that love is one  thing that  can save us and make us happy!!!

well, you already know i like this song,these drums and guitars, love that bass part about 2:00 !
vox are nice, but not the best to be honest(I couldn't do better myself though), maybe different mixing could help out a little?
the mix is clear but a little too 'hi enhanced' maybe? or lacking warmth(lo)? something strange(phasing?) in cymbals?
guitar sounds great
anyway, really really like the song!
now

Cool song.

My only critique is that one of the guitars sounds a bit flat. It's the soft-tone bluesy guitar through the very first verse. However, once it goes into the chorus and beyond that point, you can't really hear it anymore.

Good playing. Wonderful instrumental break/guitar solo.

this song has good potential. i just feel that some how there are a couple of loose ends in this track, like when you go into the chorus and into the solo, also the ending of the track. things can be improved by changing how you get into them. i agree that the 'soft-tone bluesy guitar' sounds a bit out of the scene.

once again this song has great potential. enjoyed listening to it. good luck.

i vote

I didnt dig the guitar effects, too archaic for my taste. Due to lack of understanding the lyrics I think I have been bereft of enjoying the song completely. Hence, I cant say anything about the lyrics. Mix is good. Please get a good guitar effects pedal, it will change the entire feel of this song. I like the paino and synth a lot.

I like this song, which I understand the language,
Nevertheless,
I think the riff guitar should rest a little bit more.
"Less is more" in the first verse
Like the solo-part,
a really good song

the vocals completely fit the mood of the song and the lyrics are great.

i agree with the vocals... need to find a better mix with
some of the other lush parts...
and the other guitar needs to hit a different note, it's sounding a bit flat...
can't make out the lyrics too well
will have to check them out...
how many people do you have working on this...?
just you..?
it's great work, it could be better...

everybody else here have already told about the vocals... it's hard to make'em sound right (I am still working on this part of mixing/mastering and my productions are bad too). The song is well constructed though. A bit more work and it could sound excellent...

Yes I did!

i like this but it is a pretty raw sounding mix
guitar tuning suspect???
an eq thing ...........instruments ..... vocs not balanced
splash the fish
very centred in the mix ......a bit of experimenting with the panning could lift this song.
you obviously worked really hard on this

i vote high 88%

kersplash

I like..I like

Flyer

is this a one take record?
You have good ideas to make a nice song.
I like the instrumentation
The mixing quality could be better.
 

Good luck to your next recordings

Ha! the comments follow the song, 
Yes you've cranked it up from too much 'metallic' effect to one kick ass rock song! 

good song  this progression is widely used in  rock music, it always lends itself to good melodies and powerful choruses.  the quality and mix needs some work but it's still good