This is some kind of fast-thrown-together-overnight-tune that I did some days ago. It's overall qualitiy isn't meant to be better than it is - it's just a demo. The real recording will come soon. What do you think? Don't be to hard on me, I know a am far from perfect or mainstream or even good english :-))
I wanted to keep it simple, just as in the sixties, where everyone could sing along with a tune and could keep it in mind very easy cause it's so simple.

Yes, It's great, I like the guitar's strummed rhythm. Interesting vocals, very appropriate with the theme. Nice simple electric solo in the middle  . Doesn't really need much more...

Good job!

I would say for the singing on:
Going to go to an Island where the sun always shine
When there air is blowing soft through my mind.

I think it'd be nice if the melodies went higher in pitch. It's kinda boogie woogie, sixties, but it's very, very depressing, it needs to some happiness :P.

I'll be interesting what the final recording comes out like!

If its simple your trying to get, as in 'sing along'  'sixties' simple you've got way too many words going on in there if you ask me.
I wouldn't know what to sing along too, as in a catchy 'simple' chorus!!
Ok there is a chorus, but maybe indeed it doesn't stick out enough to make it sing allongable too.
Sorry for being hard on you! But you can take it cant you? 

I really liked the tune and your rhythm is excellent, love the guitar chugging along!

Thank you for your input! @kings I understood, what you wanted to say, no prpblem ;-)

those lyrics are really cool man.
I dig that kinda vibe, i wish i could write simple music
Every time I try to write something like that it always feels like its incomplete so then I have to make it more complex.
great vocals

Kings, I hear ya...  this is the first time
I've listened to it myself.. before I saw
your review, this song kept screaming,
kingston trio - Gene Pitney (man who
shot liberty valance), even boyce & hart
everly brothers meet the ventures kinda
mood myself..  guess the sing along  thing
is in there somewhere too..
  Walnussbaer, ich bein gut...  I like it!

blessings,

blueyes..

you do need to make everything fit
nice and tight...  would like to see
the lyrics and have the song playing
where I could pin point the spots I
mean... will listen to it again...

blessings,

bluey

it would fit right in with a quentin tarantino  movie.

welcome to the amp..................go for it
i love this
more please

the fish