adjusted the drumsounds as suggested, and added some synths, so its a noodle now i guess,
wonder about the synth-sounds i chose being the best fit though
Wah-what U think?

fabulous start!!!!!!!...............I Write as I Listen.........
Organ 2 die for ...........great build  I'm excited!!!!!!!! .................
drops.................. still great sounds!!!!!!!
Gets better ........WOW. ............ I'm dancing...................

 Wah-wah-whats-next

can go one of 2 ways i think....................... either find a lyric with a melody...............or just find a gob stoppin melody to go with it

its a midges knacker from being amazin!!!!!!!! it needs a voice i think
ker whammy sploosh i love it
great drums and weaving guitars

some one to help?????

fish i vote

tnx Sword, I noticed the lack of a strong melody too, but i dont seem to get one,
like i said, i am doubting the synth sounds, kind off set me on the wrong track maybe.
also i am not to eager to sing myself, i only do that to record an idea or a vision, but always hope to find a better singer for it oneday, usually i never find one, so there i am stuck with my own bad vocals..

so if anyone feels for helping out, be my guest
(this actually goes for all my uploads, if only i still have the multi tracks: Vox wanted!!)

The drums sounds good.
The playing is tight.
Wah is interesting.

Does sound like I needs a melody but that might get hard nearer the end because there's so much going on as well as a transition to this.

you are right with that all except for the playing, there is none, only programming 
tnx anyway

Hahaha so that's why it's pretty much flawless :P.

only programming you say? Sounds very cool... I like the synths, works well with the rest of it. Great tune, it would sound great with vocals, I'm sure you could get someone to sing for ya.

Love it, very fun and upbeat.

And thanks for posting on my tracks 

it's ace.... very energizing. grooves like this are better at fighting the common cold than asprin which means this is really doing good for my current state of health.. hehhee

keep it up!

Sorry I'm late! I haven't been here for a while so it was down the page and no longer red :red faced icon:
OK I get it, I'll see if I can fit 'If I was you' if you want, maar ik vraag me af.... though having a vocal that is 'of a different nature' to the music and combining them 'in the mix' is an excellent 'sound scape song', they do I feel have to 'join' somewhere along the line, and somehow I don't think 'If I was you' could keep up with the shear funkiness of this excellent piece.
If it's the 'coming in at an angle' your looking for I could muster up some thing else!
But I now know how you want it anyway! Thanks.

Full feel-good drivin' song! just the vocals missing, maybe you'll have them for the summer-hope so!
Sittin in the back of a T-bird, drivin' along Sunset avenue chuggin', sun beatin down on the back of your neck,
nice!