Any suggestions/advice, particulary to my singing, would be much appreciated.

Thanks 

Bright song ...            Ok ninjalung the first what appealed to me was the ray davies ....kinks lyrical  quality.
2nd     The tone is ok just be aware of really hitting the notes , pitching overall was good just slipping a tad flat ...but that vox style has a real appeal when mastered .
I really like your song brightend me up heaps thanx
 

Thanks, Blakhatz

I'll work on making sure I hit the notes, thanks, that helps.

Glad you liked it, thanks!