Just a good ol' drinking anthem i did as a tribute to my fellow booze enthusiasts. My name is Ben, and i'm an alcoholic. (nah..not really....i can quit anytime)..hahaa. Hope you enjoy.

Hi Ben
Rap is not my thang, and songs about alcohol don't inspire me at all.
But having said this I still liked your alcohol induced rap!
The chorus lines sound very eminem but I like him so is OK.
The piano doesn't seam to fit properly yet it does give the song a happy tipsy feel!
The reason rap doesn't 'grab' me is because it's so 'in your face', look at me rapping about what I'm doing!
And very rarely takes me to a higher awareness, unless of course its intelligent with cleaver flowing raps!
And some of this is.

you spelled clever wrong.

hahaha.. just kidding.. thanks for the response! i appreciate it.
eminem? grrrrrrr. nah, it's ok.

cheers

well well well, look at the Canadian boy represent'n....very cool ...I love this! the whole drunkenness of the tune..your  voice has a nice calmness to it even when your spittin a mile a minute..getting an old school vibe big time..any chance that you were or still are a 3rd Bass fan?

not sure wot to say.............
really like the rap ..................but this aint a rap site
could u work with a band?........... or a guitar
just listen 2 what else is going on on this site .................... songwriters

get my drift? 


splash the fish

Yea! lol

Could have been a Freudian Slit, sorry! a Freudian Slip!

Raps have to be cutting edge?

Sorry bout the eminem ref but it does : everybody in the place to be, just tip your cups up, celebrate with me !

But the rest is FilthyVarmint!

I hear what you're saying, however....what about the backing track? It was created like over half the music on this site if I'm not mistaken.....Remember the whole a computer IS an instrument argument? I dunno..don't see a problem as long as he keeps his nine put away, his bitches in check and his posse under control..... Seriously though, as long as the lyrical content doesn't  get out of control...what's the harm?

WOW!!

   I Like it!!!  I like some Rap not much!..... Most you can't listen to if you have kids...
I like the ending.... sounds.. cool!  I must say, this is a clean rap!
........and that's a GOOD thing in my book! or my opinion....

I know this isn't a rap site....but this this song is better and nicer then a few others
I have heard on here!  grin  

Welcome to the AMP!........... Would like to hear more.....

Do you do more songs other then rap?.....techno?   I bet you can do whatever....
You have allot of talent! 

-NT4M

P.s. I speel words wrong ALL THE TIME!!  LOL.... that's why I use the Speel Checker!!  LOL

YEAH BOY!

     We Gots a FILTHYVARMINT up in HERE!

         Yeah...  Dis is kickin...   I agree with Basket on the 3rd Bass vibe...   For real...

  As for this style..  It is rap, and rap was at one time not allowed, but Mud has made spoken on this before.. I believe as of right now, the rule breaks down like this...  Rap/hip hop is allowed, as long as it is creative, and does not have offensive and foul language.... so in other words, If I make a rap saying that *insert ethnic slur here* must die, that;s not allowed, but If I make a rap saying Flowers grow in the garden, that's cool...  So, I think it's alright....  and I really really REALLY like it.... it's fun, and very creative... well mixed, and well executed...  You have a good flow, that really fits the mood of the track... 
 
             JimK

I'm too drunk to unnerstan all dem raps. bombdiggity fo sho.

thanks everyone!

...even you swordfish. haha. i hear you, and believe me, i hate "rap" (and rappers) probably more than most of you. I'm not a fan of the word rap, myself. Most of what people hear is absolute garbage.....but there's a lot of quality out there as well. As for me, I'm honest with what i do. I don't rhyme about jewelery, women, etc......and i don't have time to listen to idiots who do.

aaaaanyway....i appreciate all the feedback....and realize this isn't exactly a hip hop friendly site...but figured i'd throw some up and see the response.

here's the lyrics for you toasted:


oh shit, ten minutes to six, my pedal hit the floor
i got a date with captain morgan at the liquor store
while i'm at it better nab a pack of lucky
cause runnin out of booze is like a vacuum, SUCKY

friday night, wait maybe it's thursday
either way im out to get retarded in the worst way
sip baccardi, let's party it's my birthday
well, not really, but it fit in with the wordplay

ladies, let an ugly guy buy you a drink
it doesn't always mean he's trying get inside of your pink
on second thought, usually it does
but if he hooks enough to look good it could be love

all my cats who normally can't dance
get on the floor and move like you got ants in your pants
just do whatever, move however, who gives a shit
grab the mic, karaoke night, let it rip

Chorus:
Everybody in the place to be
just tip your cups up, celebrate with me
black out, glass up, down the hatch, pass out
slam till you puke, or the bouncer throws your ass out
whether you at the bar buyin shots
or out back slammin 40's in the parkin lot
just, get nuts, stick together, liquor is the glue
and say it with me, LIVER SCHMIVER! I GOT TWO!

verse two, you start to get the hiccups
throw your hands in the air like it's a stick-up
get wasted in vegas, have a quick marriage
play a game of skate naked, use your liquid courage

cuts and scrapes, vomit on your sweater
wakin up with a strange broad, you wonder how you met her
it's all good, so what you lost your wallet
or made out with that loser at the whatchamacallit?

for me liquor and mics combined suck
i start to rhyma..and..ads......wait....what?
gettin drunk and startin fights is lame
provin who's the man with you is not why i came

props to the kid who brought the black label
i come with much music like i was Matte Babel
for the hip hop heads, and even punk kids
shouts to my prarie dogs, and all you drunk chicks

Chorus

Meanwhile the next day.....
ugghhh man i'm never drinkin again.......that's what you always say
friends call to give you a re-cap
and let you just how you got a cast on your knee cap

that same night, doin' it up
your crew in the cut, maybe have a few at the club
perhaps there's a show to go to, slam a few first
if your liver could speak he'd say, man you the worst!

but he can't so fuck him, what's he done for you?
and plus you got another one, slam another brew
have two, matter fact, fill the bong watch the foam
it's best you don't remember the long walk home

pilsner, lager, pint, bottle, long as it's cold
or if you're drunk enough, sippin bottoms thats old
hi-balls, martini, straight, twist of lime, ice
what's your poison? bottoms up, have a good night!

One question though....   Are you an Alien??  Cuz, the rest of us Earthlings only have one liver...   just wonderin..

             JimK

I aint into Rap....But G'Damn, this is cool....niced work here....cool lyrics

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