Thinking of a trip on a red bus across a bridge over the Thames.

I like it very much! 
Love the guitar at the beginning!!
It's a good song, but it's a little boring (at least I think so).
Maybe some vocals would be nice... 
Love the bass too! 

great sound with the guitars. drums fit the tune. but before you can call this a song please put something interesting in it. the extreme lead guitar is not enough. anyway quality is good and I am looking forward to hear the redo of this

Listening!
Hearing!
I told my self I'd give it an hour, which I now have, sussed out the song to my own simple understanding, written an A4 for the first half. Will record and send later, got a gate to make!

Do I have your e-mail address? I don't think I do! Do you want to PM it to me? I'll record tonight or tomorrow night.

Nice tune.
I don't know if I really like the guitar sounds... may be you should have added as the song advanced an over-driven guitar or something like that.
Good work.
      
         > Iszil

good

Thanks for the comments.
Maybe it's a bit boring, but not the most boring ever 
Iszil, I don't think a guitar with overdrive would fit on this one, perhaps if there was a solo part somewhere, but didn't think of it.
Kings, I'll msg you.
Cheers you all
Geo

Shiny, joyful music. Raising spirits! Thanks.

This sounds like it has potential for a nice vocal song but I do like what you're doing as an instrumental piece.Is very New age rock if there's such a thing.Anyway like always good job!!

Well...thanks a lot Marino
There's actually a sung version of this tune made by Kings.
It's a collaboration work
Cheers

I like.. i.m.h.o. could use a hamond b-3
and leslie sound.. tha's the ol school m.s.s.
funk peekin through.. can't add much more
to this cuz I agree a real distinct guitar riff,
maybe with minimal distortion or as one said
overdrive, and maybe a vocal.. something with
harmony..


but all that had been said already...

dan - blue

Cheers Blueyes...I know vocals what you exacly what you meant and I agree about the vocals, not sure about a guitar with overdrive..maybe 'minimal distortion' as you said could work.
Thanks for the comment