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I like the atmosphere youve created.
Vocals is what it needs...me saying this, that haven't posted a single song with vocals.
But you do sing don't you?

A contender 4 the bright and chirpy song gong? mmmmm
There is that term brooding ,picture an  escapee from Sin City  manga novel , atmospheric.

In truth I don't know whether vocals are needed in a piece like this.

Haunting .

moody loop...........needs your voice fer sure
i vote as it is
splash
the fish

The mood of this song - I love.  Yes it does need your voice but as it is, it reminds me of something you'd hear between two songs on an album (in the middle or something).  With singing this would be a really moody piece.  Was it FL?  Anyway ............ just my sort of thing, thanks again PDoll.