#1December 30th, 2006 · 07:37 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Your Eyes
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This song is not in a battle


Testing out my new microphone...
This is a song about self-loathing. It was a bit too high for my singing range, and I'm not quite sure I like it.

Lyrics:
Every Now and then I hate myself
I can’t shield myself
From my eyes
Waiting here inside my room
I can’t survive my room
With myself

I think I want out of here
I wish that you were near
To see this
If only you’d see my face
You’d know disgrace
And you’d run

I see my destiny in your eyes
No surprise
I have no destiny in your mind
I don’t mind

Sometimes I have to sit a while
So I do not defile
The world
Sometimes I can’t believe myself
I can’t deceive myself
With the lies
I think I want you to fear
I don’t need to fear
Anymore
If only you’d see the truth
There’d be no excuse
And you’d cry

I see my destiny in your eyes
No surprise
I have no destiny in your mind
I don’t mind

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#2January 1st, 2007 · 09:05 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Cool, I like it. I think you need some more words/syllables and sing the lyrics faster..it seems as your vocal is dragging....Its in time I just think it would flow better ya know?


New mic sounds fine
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