this song isn't new, but i would like to know what you think. I don't feel that my voice is nice, so i used some effects. Biggest influence for the song was Nirvana

I was just listening to the other version!

I don't think the vocal works this way!
It's either the right effect but too loud or it's the light volume but the wrong effect.

Though it does partly work towards the end of the song I still think its too shrilly.

But I do like the song!

Im getting more of a Beck feel from this...I think the vocal works well...the entire song is so "dirty"...love it..I havent listened to the other version, maybe I should.Oh this is wreeking of ...whats the band....anyways they sing Cause I wanna..the strokes? or is it the hives? anyways one of those bands..

One of my favorite band amp songs! Yes similar to nirvana but completely your own style. Check out my songs, they are similar. Overall: you kick major ass, 9/10 !

I like the song it has good groove.

IMHO you need to work on some of the levels in the mix., maybe bring the kick, snare and hihat out in the mix some more ( did a guitar player mix this?) it would give it more drive. The other cymbals seem to be about right. the bass guitar level needs to come up some but I think you need to compress it some more cause sometimes it's level is right then it's back in the mix again so comp it and bring the overall level  a hair.

I like the level of the guitars with the vocals.

 I really like this song it could be great  with a remix.

i vote

  that's cool man, good work