here a small preview of my new song
the lyrics and vocals are done by Steven (razor here)
it's not finished yet but i hope you guys can give me some comments
hope to finish the song soon with your comments

greetings and happy new year!

Sounds good so far Bob, Steve

Flyer

I like bits of it, mainly the solo choruses, or the bits that are not more Dutch Reggae!
I find it such empty music.
This is not to say that you are a bad musician, because your not, your a very good musician, it's just that I cant stand Dutch Reggae.
I want to break out into "net zo als in de film ik wil het"!

As for Razor, I think the music is too weak for his strong voice, I find the music he makes suits him, powerful guitars and strings.
Once he can get over the choirboy innocence in his voice and be confident to express the deep emotions in all his words, he'll be an amazing singer!

But don't let me stop you making an excellent song just the same!

good clean performance. Not my style, but i'm sure it is good to the ears of your listeners. Keep up the good work.

6/10

what a lovely song this is. love this style.

i like it when the distortion kicks in at 1:08, sounds good.

i think the instruments should be made a bit more audible to match the vocal level.