A song I've been workingon, pls comment on improvements, structure or anything

Lyrics:

I come home twice from life school and I laugh arround with friends
I blur myself and my and pleasures my alcoholic red blood cells
Toxic waste of bad decisions in an alien world
I didn't ask for this role I never thought I would

What I am afraid of?
What is worse than this?
What's supposed to happen?
Just what did I miss?

I aim so far I'm lonely now I know we're not the same
I try to be just like them and it only leads to pain
I can't remember what it's like being only like me
Today will come when things get back to how they used to be

What I am afraid of?
What is worse than this?
What's supposed to happen?
Just what did I miss?

ok any thing.....????

1.some people (not me) like 2 read lyrics
this song very wordy........so post lyrics
2.progression......... the song grinds around the same chord progression
perhaps it needs some contrast? maybe a chorus that is obvious?not just whoaagh oagh?
3. song doesnt have a real beginning middle and end


ok its a good song but needs crafting a bit more?

a really strong hook would be usefull........ wot am i afraid of....... is good

use it more?

If Im full of s**t sorry

The Fish

Its a potential great song

Splash

Yo dude, I really like your song!

Really like your vocal, it's just nice and different, loudish, screamingish, in your faceish yet clear and understood.
Just a suggestion, not a comment, I'd like to hear this track but with the vocals done through a strong radio effect or a watery/flange type of effect. I'm sure it would make it interesting.

I've a recording of a so called Yeti, but what ever it is, it's eerie, well with a bit more forest reverb that howl of yours is getting close to it.

First off :  Welcome to Bandamp. The overall mix on this song is better then the  others I've listened to that you've posted. My thoughts on this song have been posted already so no use repeating them.