A short tune

Forgot to post the lyrics, here they are:

An inch away from being born
What's the use away from home
People here they think they know
Most of the time I feel alone

It feels like they expect a role
I sometimes wish they'd leave me alone
I settle for what's come to me
Mind won't grasp diversity

Who's the fighter
What defines him
Is the fire
Burning in him

i can`t really hear the words very well.  they`re a little quiet compared to the volume of the guitar.  maybe you could post the lyrics in the Lyrics forum section on the site.

perhaps you could change up the guitar`s part a little bit here and there. it doesn`t really change until the end of the song, and then it`s over!   it sounds like it could be a nice beginning, but it feels a little repetative by the time it hits 40 seconds or so.  maybe you could add a little bit of something like a chorus?  something where the music and melody (for the singer) could change into something new-- i think it would keep the attention of the listener more.

love to see the words!

XO, TLS