This is the basicly lets roll 2. um, yea, enjoy.

wow, its been almost a week, and no ones posted on this. A new record for my songs...                 

Because maybe this is a point where you have made some thing that is closest to a song, but you need to grow and practice and get into the whole vibe of writing and recording.
Your on the right track but remember that everybody's on a train somewhere.
Hey!
That echo effect could have been played with more!