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#1December 19th, 2006 · 11:21 AM
29 threads / 14 songs
355 posts
Poland
SEA OF LIFE
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Score: 92.0%
Rank: 4th
Battle: 2007-04


A metaphor. Bass by Puppet - thank you! 
Please comment and vote - feedback alwyas means a lot.

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#2December 19th, 2006 · 02:33 PM
185 threads / 27 songs
2,769 posts
Germany
Great production. awesome sounds.
its not worth to leave this song only on BandAmp. Hey this is for the world.

Well done, congratulations
#3December 19th, 2006 · 02:59 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
more please, very cool,very different for you eh? I love the lyrics, construction is perfect.Great job, oh I guess the bass is ok 2....LMAO jk Pup

 
#4December 19th, 2006 · 03:05 PM
116 threads / 53 songs
3,056 posts
Netherlands
Heyheyhey! There it is, there it is!

This is a very interesting twist in your style JBP, leaning strongly towards the slightly grungified wave/rock sound I am so fond of, personally (that's what I tried to emphasize with that bass line).. I love that drive, the angst, and the JBP-ness of it all, eventually still it fits right into your repertoire, and Thank You for letting me be a part of it!
#5December 19th, 2006 · 03:17 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
What an excellent song, thank you.
Just excellent!
It needs a good drummer on it before the world may hear it I'd say.
#6December 19th, 2006 · 05:48 PM
29 threads / 14 songs
355 posts
Poland
Thank you all for comments so far!
I was thinking I might try and explain what I meant as I usually don't mean a lot in my songs.
The symbolic idea I was trying to get across is that the boat stands for music and the creation of it by the musician, the person in the boat is a musician.

It's a song about our ever-present drive for fullfilment, be it creating music (which for most people feels like they're in a different world, away from the daily grind) or any other form of creation. The horizon is, in fact, home = fullfilment or, say, the feeling of joy once you know you have done what you have been wanting to do/accomplish.
Each of us is in some way aiming for that horizon, isn't it true? And we all row some kind of boats to get there. Along the way, we pass the boats that have recked, or we hear of boats that have perished. And along the way, we sometimes feel we don't belong to where we are everyday, be it our job, relationship, or anything else. We feel our skin being tight on us and we'd like toshed it, but we're afraid of changes. Anyway, I hope you understand. I have been explaining to much, I guess. Thanks for listening. 

In case you don't follow my imperfect singing, here are the lyrics:

    I'm like a newborn rowing out into sea of life
     Bare-footed true hope (that) I'll find whatever seems worthwhile

     Recklessness hiding on board of thousands perished boats
     Home's up the horizon - of that I'll sing a mournful note


How come I'm in this boat!?
The skin that's on me is tight!
And how come the boat I row is full of holes inside!?
#7December 19th, 2006 · 08:30 PM
35 threads / 26 songs
107 posts
United States of America
This song is awesome. The lyrics really rock dude.
#8December 19th, 2006 · 11:40 PM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
hey JBP, dude, this song rocks!

I love the lyrics and the meaning. And PX rocked the bass!!

Excellent! Get it out man! Boats gotta travel far.
#9December 19th, 2006 · 11:43 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
This song really rocks, its not so much groovy as it is driving (which is not my personal taste, but it definatley sounds very professional)

The chord choices are very nice, the hooks are spot on, vocals nice...

very professional, good job.
#10December 20th, 2006 · 05:50 AM
6 threads
138 posts
India
wow i totally enjoyed this.........very well done........looking forward to more of this stuff. oh and i am voting for sure.
#11December 20th, 2006 · 06:00 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
wow..
Much different than your usual indeed.....

         This is very marketable I think....   It is in the style that I am hearing on the radio of late.. 

 I think you may have something here...   Although, you'll need to fire that Bass player    

    hahahahaa...     Couldn't help it PX, ya know I love ya...  Anyway...  Seriously, it is very good, and I really do think this is something worth pushing to some commercial labels...

                   JimK
#12December 20th, 2006 · 06:21 PM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
Wonderful job. Congrats to you both.

JBP - This might be my favorite of yours. I'd encourage you to explore more in this style.

Nice work on drums. It's hard to get them sounding perfect.

Mix is great.

Nothing more to say, except keep them coming!
#13December 21st, 2006 · 09:08 AM
77 threads / 59 songs
919 posts
Netherlands
very very good and beautifull!
like the style, like the sound,like it all!
#14December 21st, 2006 · 04:34 PM
208 threads / 64 songs
2,287 posts
United Kingdom
re: SEA OF LIFE as i hear
HERE WE GO>>>>>
I just want 2 lose myself in that voice..stand back...he speaks

As for the song
MIX : vocal definition a bit lost 2 find the words in the chorus.....
(sorry v crit) could just be my speakers

LOVE LOVE LOVE Long held note,,,,,

PUP u xellent on bass.........driven jbp to different quadrant?

god ive listened to this track 15 times at least on the amp
it just grows........

sploosh.......a hit

the fish

get this mother on the house mix

vote 100% ........ u do the same
#15December 22nd, 2006 · 06:43 AM
155 threads / 29 songs
1,942 posts
United States of America
I think this is the best song I've heard here
This is in my opinion is probaobly the best or one of the best songs I've heard on Bandamp. This should top the list in the house mix. The mix is good, the music is excellent, the vocals are great,  Gets top vote.
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