#1December 15th, 2006 · 09:32 AM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
Breathe in Deeply
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This song is not in a battle


Ok, I've sort of forgotten how to play this. It's in a tuning I can't quite remember. But I found it and thought I'd put it up here as I haven't posted anything in ages.

I wrote it when I first got my present guitar. So a year and a half ago? It's a pretty emotional song.

VERSE 1

Air blows through doorways,
Shadows swimming in your eyes.
Fingerprints line the windows,
A small demise.

CHORUS

Warning all the pretty faces,
Warning all the simple minds.
You were so high when you crashed down,
It was so fast when you hit the ground.

I know, because you fell on me.

VERSE 2

Whispers breathe in deeply,
Eyelash fall upon the floor.
Blinks all sink into the teardrops,
And you miss it even more.

CHORUS

Warning all who point the finger,
Warning all who have done wrong.
You were so high when you crashed down,
It was so fast when you hit the ground.

I know, because you fell on me.

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#2December 15th, 2006 · 10:48 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
38 posts
United States of America
I like it...
I really like your music,  If i could afford it, I'd fly to new zealand just to jam with you, and maybe check out the country side, heh heh...... it reminds me a little of John Lennon, one of my heroes, you are added to my fave list, good job thanks for posting this as I'm new to the amp and might have missed out if you didn't,    hp13
#3December 15th, 2006 · 10:51 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
38 posts
United States of America
one more thing
Have you considered playing to your track, just a little,  mind you like i said brefore, i love the simplicity, but it might remind you of some of the parts you fogot,  well anyway "keep on truckin'"      hp
#4December 15th, 2006 · 12:02 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Yes you are a song writer and a musician and you can sing!!
A very beautiful song, a bit rough in places, recording and guitar, but I couldn't do it like you do so 'hats off'.
#5December 15th, 2006 · 12:11 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
It's real good as other songs I've heard from you.
Maybe this's one I like best, it's "feely".
There's a noise, some clipping or something.
Yeah the guitar's recording's a bit rough, but apart from that, excellent.
I do like simple songs, though I complicate myself in my own ones 
#6December 16th, 2006 · 01:31 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
The acoustic sounds cool, I love the dynamics, and the vocals work well into them, a style that fits well. You know how to write a great song! Much better than the stuff on the radio,    love your music, always a pleasure to listen in, but there's never anything to criticise about it! 
#7June 26th, 2008 · 12:03 PM
12 threads / 12 songs
89 posts
Canada
breathe in deeply
Nicely done Chester.
  I really enjoy your lyrics. You have a gift in writing lyrics. They make me think and ponder the meaning. I love how the song ends! Great chord choice. Anyway man, hope you are well and writing more? Have a great day!......peace....jgv
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