With the Venezuelan band unKnown artists, melanie Hinden on the vocals, Alberto Perenei on the arp synth and myself programing, it was recorded in my home studio in caracas venezuela, enjoy

Ths is not exactly my genre... though I like it because of its strange rhythm and, obviously, because of the chanteuse whose voice sounds like Martine Something in Tricky's Maxinquaye... I'd like to have a singer like that on some songs of mine :°°° Very professional job!

Big Me, you are so kind, Melanie Hinden lives in Switzerland, a very very nice girl, I could arrange something, in the end, both of you are in Europe

Man, you are a very versitile guy. I love this stuff. Very good choice of vocals and instruments / sounds. Keep posting. I'm going to check out more of your stuff.

I'd buy this..

Very good. Really nice sound and well mixed/ produced too. Main criticism- too short. I was drifting off into it and it just stopped- 1 1/2 mins. Way too short!

Very sexy female voice, interesting bubbling beeping for rhythm.  This song has a very sneaky but intense structure.  One way to improve, it seems like a lot of the instruments are in the same frequency and on similar pitches.  There's so much going on in such a short song, though, that it gets kind of overwhelming.  It depends on how you'd like this song to come off as to what to do with that, maybe extend it a give each piece a chance to shine, or else add some variety to the mix.  With such a mellow vibe, it's a shame the piece is so short, just when you're sinking into the feeling, it gets pulled out from under you.

Anyway, nice work!

interesting lyrics...

great sound... love those female vocals... indeed sexiest I've heard here on the amp

love it...

but WAY too short! and yes this DOES take away from the rating I'm giving it! ... sorry!

I do understand the length of the song, that is only a mere metaphor of life.

 I’m a little puppet but I’m not syncing in
For everything you need me, I’d be drawling in
For this and that, I can forget
Because everything I’ve done I will not regret
I’m a little puppet but I’m not syncing in
For everything I need you, I’d be drawling in
For this and that I can regret
Because everything I’ve done, you’ve done it for me
I will not regret, I will not forget

Melanie Hinden

Thank you so much for your input and feedback

Sincerely

Rod

the "male vocals" is Melanie with pitch shift, we thought that it meant something, we were dating and we had to be separated, that's ware this song came from, as our relationship, it was short... c'est la vie

thanks again

rod

many thanks from me too, to everyone who was part of unKnown Artists and made this possible and many thanks to you people for listening to it Melanie Hinden

I like the way all the elements kind of compete for your attention, always keeping you on your toes and interested in the song.

Even though it may be metaphorical, I would like to hear a longer, more developed version of this song, cos it is definatley quite unique.

Is this techno? (Sorry I am ignorant) because if it is I like it and I don't useually liek techno. The bubbling vocals (There is an extremely fast rhythm that sounded like ti was a computer voice saying something) that start around 20 and continue through the majority really stick with me. As well as the girls voice. At bout 50 seconds in you can hear a male voice and a few moments after that the bubble voice is really clear for a moment. All in all I am loveing your work.