this one might have come out better, what ya think... ps jimk,  if you want to play with that other one, feel free,  that's cool, that's what is fun about this site, eh?...


Wouldn’t that be great
Hp13,’06

Life is what we make it,    nothing more
We just hope to make it to the golden shore…
     Wouldn’t that be sweet,  it would knock me off my feet…
And I can see no need for no more war.

Time just keeps on slipping away…
I just hope to make it through another day…
Wouldn’t that be great,  I hope it’s not to late…
I wouldn’t want to waste it all away.

Money just seems to slip right though our hands…
We’re just  trying to buy a little land…
Wouldn’t that be nice,  I hope it’s worth the price…
Just a place to sit on a piece of sand.

guitar sounds fine, nice melody too, too bad for the hiss and too much lo in the (guitar)mix imo.
backwards part is fun! some timing issues here and there i dont bother too much about
nice song, enjoyed listening, enjoyed lyrics too

i like the guitar on this....sounds great. there needs to be a worked out with the vocals, its not very clear and also some vocal tuning should be done. great song you can make it much better.

okay I really like the lyrics especially the last stanza. cant comment on the song. my proxy doesnt allow me to download mp3s. but really nice lyrics. the last line really cracks me up in a sad kind of way