Lost all my direction
Like a feather in the wind
I lost my concentration
From the moment you walked in

Reality's perception
My illusion's wearing thin
If I知 not the man your after
I値l always think I should have been

Loneliness my affliction
My cure was so long gone
Then I saw you on the dance floor
Dancing to the song

Chorus

All the busted pieces
Of my life are scattered round
Some are lost forever
And never will be found

In the bag that holds my puzzle
There are pieces that are wrong
They could never fit together
There痴 some that don稚 belong

Bartender, pour me one
Just like the other one
Tonight I知 hanging
With my old friend Jose Cuervo

Chorus

Any day any day
I値l find a way
Just like John Wayne
I値l save the day

I think, that the loneliness is a normal condition of the person. The loneliness is a privilege. Be better lonely. Than, even with someone.It is necessary to suffer and the present love will come.  A song beautiful.

Very nice.....

           I really like the feel of it...  THe emotion comes through well.... this shows you have accomplished your goal..  Which means it gets a great rating from me....

        Fantastic....   Vocal is nice as well.....

                     JimK

Yes...well achieved!
It reminds me a bit to the old Cat Stevens...well, he's not called that way anymore, can't remember he's new name.
PS, what happened with the end? it cuts off

 Umm that would be Yusaf Islam

   I hear his new album is not well recieved...   I guess it isn't very good...  oh well...  I guess I will need to hear it myself before judging... 

          JimK

I'm still finding my way around Cubase.  I haven't learned to edit yet and the end was cut a little short. It was my first effort so thanks for the encouragement.  I can't tell you how good that is to hear.

You want to hear some more?

This is a really nice song, I like the lyrics a lot, you have a class voice and your guitar work is quite good. (I'm not a guitarist so all I can say is that i like it)

You seam to know enough about Cubase to come this far, it is an amazing program.

Keep on rockin!

Wow, ilike this alot,  It doesn't remind me of  Cat Yusaf  at all...   More like the austin louge lizards and those great song writers from the south west,  good job!   hp13

From the south west...hmm...and that would be in?

Great song nice voice.

The vox gets lost in the mix sometimes,Nice little mellow tune.Your voice fits right in with the bad boys of country. Toby Keith, Trace Adkins.

I love the vocals and the lyrics. guitar is good as well. sounds beautiful man.

I didn't know that the men can be so... nice. The song is very kind, cause it comes from your lonelines. I don't know. But nice try with Cubase. I wanted so much to have a program like this, but my computer is under every normal level. So... practise for me too 

its good to have this kinda style around the amp, diffrent from the indie rock styles that get and stick in here. change is good! and you my friend are the best kind of change. lyrics are beautiful, and once again so are the vox. im still curiouse are you playing with a band or just yourself and the cpu?? it sounds wonderfull. high vote from me. and your going on my top ammpers list! congrats! lol once again welcome to the amp

paperdoll

hehe forgot to vote sorry!