| Out Of The Blue |    |
Hey,
I'm back!!! With a changed vision...And probably this is my first song with vocals!! This one's called Out of the blue,and its basically about a girl...
The lyrics go as follows ::
Tomorrow never came,It never does
I don’t feel the same way without your love
And I just wanna think about you,
Till I drown in your eyes,
I wanna dream about you,
All the while,
And I just wanna thank you out,
For all those times,For all the love
For all the nights we talked endlessly,
About you and me…
When they ask me where I found you,
I tell them I found you out of the blue,
I saw all my dreams come true…
And when they asked me ”What was her name”
I said I’ll cry for you,I’ll die for you…forever and again…
(If you're complaning about the length of the song,its meant to be short and sweet! know wat im sayin
...I'll make an extended version of it...ONE FINE DAY...Lets see when that day comes...
ENJOY THE SONG!
Comments and Suggestions are WELCOME!!!
I'm back!!! With a changed vision...And probably this is my first song with vocals!! This one's called Out of the blue,and its basically about a girl...
The lyrics go as follows ::
Tomorrow never came,It never does
I don’t feel the same way without your love
And I just wanna think about you,
Till I drown in your eyes,
I wanna dream about you,
All the while,
And I just wanna thank you out,
For all those times,For all the love
For all the nights we talked endlessly,
About you and me…
When they ask me where I found you,
I tell them I found you out of the blue,
I saw all my dreams come true…
And when they asked me ”What was her name”
I said I’ll cry for you,I’ll die for you…forever and again…
(If you're complaning about the length of the song,its meant to be short and sweet! know wat im sayin
...I'll make an extended version of it...ONE FINE DAY...Lets see when that day comes...ENJOY THE SONG!
Comments and Suggestions are WELCOME!!!
| Vocals |
You should never sing..
:P
Kidding, I have one word with an explanation mark for you..
NICE!
Keep singing, that was a great start!
:P
Kidding, I have one word with an explanation mark for you..
NICE!
Keep singing, that was a great start!
| Drums in your picture.. |
P.S. There's only one thing wrong with those drums...
They havn't been played
They havn't been played
Nice song......I have a suggestion..At When they ask me where I found you, its screaming for a full on band attack...drums,keyboards...well ya get what Im saying..Something to think about for the extended version. I would do:
When they ask me where I found you,
I tell them I found you out of the blue,
I saw all my dreams come true…
And when they asked me ”What was her name”
I said I’ll cry for you,I’ll die for you…forever and again… twice and on the repeat the band fades out and its just you and the guitar for: I said I’ll cry for you,I’ll die for you…forever and again. Then you need to get yourself a second verse.
When they ask me where I found you,
I tell them I found you out of the blue,
I saw all my dreams come true…
And when they asked me ”What was her name”
I said I’ll cry for you,I’ll die for you…forever and again… twice and on the repeat the band fades out and its just you and the guitar for: I said I’ll cry for you,I’ll die for you…forever and again. Then you need to get yourself a second verse.
This is the beginnings of a beautiful song,
I cant and wont comment about the guitar, the music sounds good.
I do find though that you might have gone slightly over with the vocal effect, don't ask me where they should be, but I do feel that in this type of song they should be 'warmer' with different reverb settings.
BCs idea seams just the thing to make this a fully grown song!
I cant and wont comment about the guitar, the music sounds good.
I do find though that you might have gone slightly over with the vocal effect, don't ask me where they should be, but I do feel that in this type of song they should be 'warmer' with different reverb settings.
BCs idea seams just the thing to make this a fully grown song!
| re: Out Of The Blue |
Good.
It's a bit short. Look forward to the extended version!
It's a bit short. Look forward to the extended version!
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