I call these essay's, Eventually I'll write real songs..

 

 Talk to you all soon...

I did all the vocals 1 take, closed my eyes and improved..

 Enjoy

 I love Fl Studio...

 Robbie.

man i come back from vecation away and find you in my midst of the amp. wowwowowowowow your vox are the greatest breath of fresh air ive heared in a while so great man
although my love
as much as i adore this
i really think you need to get off your high horse
but music wise, really very grat
welcome to the amp ear and hope you have fun and make more for us to listen to

the amps
very own
paperdoll

Well I guess what I never explained is that "my world of people I know" aren't ready for me..

 My family, and the people I work with have no clue what I'm capable of, and just would freak 'em out...

 That's all...
 
 I know there's a world of amazing tallent out there, full of professors, I am but a university student (although i learnt all this on my own), but I aint stoppin till I have my masters

 Thanx for the compliment.

 Robbie..

pretty "big" sound, very good quality, except for that loud bang, it distorts.

interesting processing on the vocals - for some reason the whole "essay" breathes "great commercial potential"... must be the audience-cheers sample in there. hahah.

I found it very accessible, and an interesting listening experience. come to think of it, I feel something INXS-ish in there.

Like I said, so far just essay's... More just to experiment with my capabilities...

 I throw songs that really aren't meant to be critiqued (like repetitive piano) I knew that when I wrote it.. But was just exploring, i switch songs too fast I never really finish them..

 We'll see how I do with this one..


 

 Robbie..

Hey Robbie dude go for your masters, this one is a right step in the right direction.

Having read PX's Inxs comparison I can agree.

I quite like the power of the vocalist in these type of rock songs.
You make the music go with what is being sung, making the vocal message immense, so if the creator of the song has an attitude so does the song!

So Go God Go!

Revel in it if you can create it,
but watch out for oranges and sex games!

hmmmm.....i give u an A!! lol.

There are some real musical elements in this one.
why do you think the world is not ready for you? uhmm.. a very sunny way of thinking about one self

Another pattern based tune, nothing special

repetitive

Best part is the vox and the recording quality of it. Go ahead with this stuff. Maybe some time you make real music

Another pattern based song...

 There are forests to be seen, but you only see trees around you.. So you're lost...

 

 What do you suggest of yours that has as much, umph! , that i may listen to in order to learn from ya? I'm not picking fights, I'm here to learn...

 Robbie.

It souds as you were playing it in a big arena!..ha
It's cool, it's cool...