Short clip of an ambiental song that i made...

What can I say man, you really have something here. I like the riff and the (violin, organ, synth). They flow so dramatically togather here. I wish it was a bit more dynamic though, something else with the riff other than fade, repeat, in fade out...
 
you know?

That hi-piched instrument is really haunting though, man. It is still with me as I type this.. 55 seconds is a good point for your song.

I agree with our Dark Lord that it's a really cool riff but that it could do something else at some point, like grow and develop.

I don't personally like the strings coming in, they come in from some odd corner, though I thought they might 'bring it all together', but I don't think they do.

Needs some Jelly

I did this in anout 2 hours and it was just something to keep me occupied...Dont take the track that seriously...it`s just an idea...

Heh. I played my song in about... 4 minutes. I guess it goes to show how well things sound when replayed and practiced, and refined.

Maybe I should try that.

How can i see this songs URL...i want to place it on myspace profile?

Well the link to this thread is "http://forum.bandamp.com/amp.html?xml=Dark.bandamp.com/playlist.xml&webID=Dark.bandamp.com/playlist.html" I tried to view source to see if the code is there, but couldn't...

if you open a new tab in FF or a new page in IE, drag or open a bandAmp page in it you'll see the short address like this :
"http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3788.html",

to link to a song/page/picture in this site you put the address between the code
or do a

What Dark has up there is a page opened from another page, so the PHP links the address forwards, and it becomes really long.

Dark, the page source is always HTML but a forum site like this one is actually PHP or any other 'server side' coding, which cannot be seen by the viewer.