i've not completed it coz i was a bit confused wht shld i do next so if u guys have any feedback do tell me...............

Now I think that 'thumping' beat of yours is a bit too loud.

And your use of the synths is not the best I've heard from you,
If I put this down to 'learning' and 'trying out' then it's OK in my book,
but I don't think its a 'good' song yet.

The melody is good, just the 'wrong' sounds for my liking.

Or it it supposed to be "skrewd"?