#1November 30th, 2006 · 02:58 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
6 posts
Turkey
Ressamin Goz yaslari
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This song is not in a battle


Hello
You are not going to understand the lyrics but hope you like the composition
Thanks


Sonbahar ruzgarlari
savurur yapraklari
aglayan renkler
meze olur sairlere
poyraz eser,karanlik coker

bulutlar aglar,
agaclar titrer,
boyalar akar,
tablo silinir.
henuz bitmemistir...

ressamin gozyaslari
dusuverir topraga
haykiran yalnizligi
saldirir kalbine
bir sanci vurur
golgesi yikilir

kuslar aglar,
gokyuzu inler,
gunes batar,
gun biter...

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#2November 30th, 2006 · 06:02 AM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
hmmmm
I find the melancholy lyrics fit the mood of the guitar well....  although I don't understand the lyrics fully.. I do understand it is something about  the autumn leaves blowing in the wind, and colors running together, swirling..  It appears to be a song about realizing ones mortality... the shortness and vulnerability of life... and of course I really don't know enough Turkish to order a sandwich... but this is what I am thinking it is about..  and it fits well the mood.. 

  The guitar, is played well...  and the vocals are not bad...  could use some polishing... and the entire song needs some recording enhancement..that is really my only crtiscism the recording quality... but overall it's a decent song....

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#3November 30th, 2006 · 10:44 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
So JimK you speak Turkish?......Cool!

I tried to translate the lyrics in Bablefish, what a crap translation program it has no Turkish.

About your song, all I can say is that I love passion and conviction from musicians and vocalists, and you have both.
#4November 30th, 2006 · 10:52 AM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
I like the mood of the vocals and if Jim got it right with the meaning, well...it's quite meaningful.
Liked the vocals, the guitar needs more work.
Welcome to bandamp
Looking forward to hearing some more
#5November 30th, 2006 · 11:19 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
6 posts
Turkey
Wow! Thank you so much for your very detailed coments  
How sad that I didn't know this web site before
I'll try to translate the lyrics
#6November 30th, 2006 · 11:41 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
6 posts
Turkey
Autumn winds
swings leaves
weeping colors
becomes appetizer for poets
boreas blows,darkness falls

clouds weep,
trees shake,
dyes flow,
painting erases.
hasn't finished yet...

tears of the artist
falls on to the ground
his crying loneliness
attacks his heart
a pain beats
his shadow falls down

the birds cry
skies moarn,
sun goes down,
the day ends...
dyes flow,
painting erases.
hasn't finished yet
hasn't finished yet
hasn't finished yet...
#7November 30th, 2006 · 11:34 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
The lyrics are really good..I like the english version, I'm not saying you should but may consider an english version?
#8December 1st, 2006 · 02:23 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
6 posts
Turkey
If you could help me with the translation I would love to
But as you can see this translation is not perfect and I don't know how to make proper english lyrics
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